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Continuing trying to use these pens... Maybe I should draw bigger or try pressing really lightly with it because these lines are much bolder than I wanted.

Aside from that:
-Hair looks a little weird
-Eyes may be a little low

Please critique. I haven't had anything critiqued in a long-ass time and really want some outside opinion for a change. :I

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:iconcatwoman4ever:
I'd be happy to critique you! :aww: Over all the pose is nice, however the toes on the extended leg are very awkward. They look almost broken. Your linework is a bit messy. Try working on keeping smooth lines and vary the thickness for a manga style look.

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Thanks for the quick reply and helpful advice. :)

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You're welcome! I'm happy to help anytime. :aww:

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