Continuing trying to use these pens... Maybe I should draw bigger or try pressing really lightly with it because these lines are much bolder than I wanted.
Aside from that: -Hair looks a little weird -Eyes may be a little low
Please critique. I haven't had anything critiqued in a long-ass time and really want some outside opinion for a change. :I
I'd be happy to critique you! Over all the pose is nice, however the toes on the extended leg are very awkward. They look almost broken. Your linework is a bit messy. Try working on keeping smooth lines and vary the thickness for a manga style look.
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